In this episode of the Admittedly Podcast, host Thomas Caleel emphasizes the critical role of courage in crafting standout college application essays. Drawing from his experience reviewing thousands of essays, Thomas shares insights into why authentic, bold storytelling is essential for making an impression on admissions officers. He discusses how vulnerability, self-awareness, and owning your unique story can set applicants apart in a sea of polished but impersonal submissions.
Key Takeaways:
Courage Over Conformity: Avoid mimicking “successful essays” found online. Let your unique voice and personal experiences guide your storytelling.
Own Your Story: Don’t soft-sell your accomplishments. Showcase your successes and challenges with pride and authenticity, focusing on what drives you.
Embrace Vulnerability: Essays should be personal and sometimes uncomfortable to write, as they offer a glimpse into your motivations, character, and growth.
Be Fearlessly Honest: Share your lived experiences—even failures—and how they shaped you. This honesty resonates with admissions officers seeking genuine insight into applicants.
Not Every School Will Say Yes—And That’s Okay: A bold essay might not appeal to every institution, but it will connect with the schools that are the best fit for you.
College essays are an opportunity to share your authentic self and connect with schools that align with your story. Be brave, bold, and unafraid to show your vulnerability. Follow Thomas on Instagram and TikTok at @admittedlyco for more thoughts and guidance.