Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
admission fees /charges
entrance fees /charges
a paid-admission model
a free-admission model
to deter
to overcrowd
to fund the upkeep of their collections
collections/works/exhibits
high-tech methods
to minimize
The Whitney Museum of American Art
flood wall
to keep something in good condition
cultural heritage
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