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Apr 2025
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Episode 161 - Ways to give readers what ...

James Thayer
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Readers want five things in a story, three of which are right in the beginning. Here's a discussion of how to deliver those five things. Plus, a character's thoughts are the least interesting aspect of a story. How can we show what a character is thinking without entering her mind? Support the show Buy the master class. 
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