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Jan 2024
26m 32s

#125: Novel Writing Pitfalls: Don't Make...

Savannah Gilbo
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“ The purpose of a first draft is not to come up with something that's perfect. Instead, the purpose is to explore your story and get it out of your head.” - Savannah Gilbo Transform your writing as I reveal 5 all-too-common mistakes that plague writers. Learn the savvy strategies to sidestep these blunders and discover my top-notch tips for rectifying them ... Show More
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