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Jul 2020
23m 52s

Essays: What Doesn’t Work

INSIDE THE YALE ADMISSIONS OFFICE
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Part 2 of 3. Application essays are an opportunity to speak directly to admissions officers and share meaningful insights and reflections. Unsuccessful essays miss that opportunity. Hannah and Mark share some of the ineffective choices that regularly appear in essays and discuss why each choice doesn’t work to the student’s benefit.

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